Greetings to all, my name is Sergio, I am new here in the community.
If it’s not too much trouble I’d like some feedback on the design of a resume template I’ve been working on.
This is it:
What do you think?
I appreciate any advice you can give me, any comment will be helpful
Thanks in advance for the help.
hi this is cool in a general way though this can be improved indeed. First of all i think that the sharp crossing the face of the profile is not a good idea, it does not help to see the concerned person and it does not look particularly good in my view …
icons are a bit to simple or common
the introducing boldness for categories would have helped u o have a better hierarchy of information …
and most importantly if the top right part looks good like this, u have a main issue in terms of contrast which basically mean that the texts are neither outstanding nor really readable …
Thanks for the reply
Sorry for the delay of my response, I have been dealing with some issues that I had to attend first. Today I made some changes in the design of my resume template.
Here it is:
hi this is not bad but u still have a few alignment issues and most importantly some contrast concerns too … some texts are really almost invisible at this stage due to the lack of contrast with the background …
damn man, they should be paying you for this, I saw the difference beofre and after and I was amazed. Of course this guy has skills! But you nailed it, maybe you made a hard reject design to get approved! 
Do you mean by "some texts are really almost invisible at this stage due to the lack of contrast with the background " …
…that he should make some text brighter grey and so on? Because all of it is black?
Also you think he should make 100% white the person’s name on the top right part?
What else do you see? I am curious! !! 
lol i am really not thinking that they will hire me one way or another as not only do i get the job done for free this far but in addition i will not do as if i was really liked in HQs here lol
no grey is not a good idea in my view as this could be still the same, he needs to use white in my view contrast is much required for readability and if he does not do indeed he is breaking a basic design principle : contrast
He is right 
Thanks for the comments. I think it’s a good design, but I want to make sure everything is fine. So, I appreciate any comment, even to indicate the smallest detail, so that this design achieve the approvation.
I have made the text brighter so that it can be seen more clearly. As for what you say about the alignment, if it’s not too much trouble, could you be more specific about which parts I should correct?
u are right to consider all details … we never know some small compiled things may make avery big difference
At least I want to know with more precision about the alignment issues you saw, just to take them into account and then I will decide what to do.
