Feedback on Hard-Rejected track

In your opinion, why does this song not deserve to get to the stock market or at least get a Soft Reject? I really need your help.

Hi friend!
I don’t have much experience, but I tell you my opinion: I see the melody and the percussion well, but the rhythmic base I notice a bit repetitive, apart from that I would change the chords.
I would also look for some library with a little better quality.
I hope it helps you, I have had quite a few rejections too.
Do not lose the desire and much encouragement!