Feedback on a rejected track ! thanks

Hello everyone!

I sent this corporate trying to get some inspiration from the latest news. I don’t understand if the problem is the mix, the songs themselves or something else. thank you

Hi! Your main melody sounds too “obsessive-loud” throughout the whole track, ear gets tired of it (except your main melody, nothing is heard in the track, the arrangement is lost). There is also practically no development.
Try to listen to the top tracks in the same genre.
My thoughts. :slightly_smiling_face:
Good luck! :wink:

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Melody is a bit loud and too repetitive. Piano and drums sound good though!

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