So had a song which had previously been rejected, so I asked for feedback here on the forums and then went back to improve it based on the suggestions given.
This is the original version, which got rejected (for comparison purposes):
Here is the reworked version:
I completely re-did the mixing to make it less muffled, less lofi-ish, and overall more professional sounding.
I also did some changes to the arrangement, changing the beat, adding variation and making the bassline a bit less melodic.
So I’m asking for feedback again before re-submitting it. Do you guys think this improved versuib has a better chance of being approved, compared to the first one? Are there any other problems with the mix/arrangement I should fix or work on before submitting? Any suggestions overall?