Do you think my first track will be accepted?


#1

I have submitted this track and I am awaiting review of it. It is my first submission and any criticism is welcome and appreciated. Thank you all for your time.


#2

I think it will get accepted. It’s a good track!

My only suggestion for future tracks would be to get to the point a little quicker. I would have had the guitar at 0:26 come in at 0:13 instead.

Great stuff though!


#3

Thank you very much for your advice JackWinn. I think I will pull the track from the review que and fix it based on your suggestion. Rock on my friend!


#4

To my mind track ok, it has good chances to be approved. A little detail: to my mind bass drum sound a little bit hard.


#5

Thank you for listening and giving me this valuable advice LuckyBlackCat. I will do a revision of the song with this in mind and repost in this thread later today. Again thank you my friend


#6

I think the idea sounds solid. Hopefully it squeaks past the review.


#7

Thanks SmartOwlMusic, I feel like this will get easier as I write more music for libraries. I appreciate you listening and commenting