Corporate (Has Been Rejected) Help Me
its not bad.
I would lower the piano a bit, and pan some sounds to make a nice stereo image.
also the problem is that it starts and ends too abruptly, it needs an intro and outro, something to slowly bring elements in. it feels rushed to end!
Thank you!
1 thing I would add. I think the reverse cymbal is a bit distracting, I would eq it, make it blend in more in the mix.
Also 1 more idea I for the ending is to use the lead synth and end it with the root key so it feels the track has been resolved if you get what I mean. Or simply check what others used to end their tracks for reference.
That’s the best thing to do to make sure you’re on the right track, stay original of course but it does not hurt to learn a thing or 2 from the best-selling tracks.
All the best! 
Thank you ))
The reverse cymbal is too loud. Other than that, the only thing I can point is that it sounds the same as other endless dozens of corporate tracks out there. You should try to make it stand out somehow.
Okay Very Thank You!