Thank you so much!
Your animation has lots of problems. It’s too fast and it’s not smooth. The animation of the paper plane looks very jerky. Try to make it smooth. Check out this tutorial. The animation of shapes on the back of the image looks very odd. Also, all the floating objects’ animations look odd. It seems to me that you animate floating objects manually. Use the wiggle expression. It will give a better result. Overall, you have so many things to improve. I will suggest you watch some tutorials on animation to improve your animation.
Thank you.
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I will to fix it, thank you 
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A ask… I can add Easy Erase and 2 seconds for not animation very fast?
You can try. Actually, It is hard to assume without doing the animation.
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Thank you
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Much better than before. But not there yet. You need to improve the animation much more to be approved in videohive.
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It’s very better animations.
Not there yet. You need to improve more.
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how?
please help me
Compare your item with other items of videohive. Then you can guess there is something missing in your item.
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I not understand you… please again explain thank you.
@ThunderMotion
I start make other item to easy animation but I not want animation promo because I am sure will to be hard rejected… I would like create a mockup animation mobile…
Those shapes appear suddenly.
same problem with the shadow.
Appear suddenly. No animation.
At this point, the animation stucks a little bit.
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Actually, those are some major problems. There are so many things that can be improved. I am suggesting you compare your animation with other similar items that have been approved on Videohive. After that, you can guess where improvement is needed.
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Thank you… I love you
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You are welcome.
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