Another item rejected on AudioJungle Need advice

Dear friends need your help. I am again rejected. Please let me know whats wrong.

Ok=). Imagine that Iā€™m selling you this music track. Would you buy it? And if you bought it, where would you use it?

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Too simple.

It sounds unnatural, it seems to be from parallel universe, where the people is walking on the sky. Make a harmony more positive and add main melody more melodic. Good luck!