You are ignoring feedback from other threads. There’s no point asking forums for feedback if you then entirely disregard it.
- You cannot submit stock assets with very basic and poorly executed text on top applied.
- Take away the things you didn’t design and cannot share and all that is left is a few bits of basic text that could be easily done in no time and without design experience.
- The text is also full of design errors including poor font choices, random mix of alignment and direction, and zero hierarchy.
- There are several elements that feel placed without purpose or design reasoning.
You also need to be very careful about your submissions. The fact you can create as many as you have asked for feedback on in such a short space of time, highlights the problem, and too many rejections in too shorter time will lead to your account being banned.
Thanks for your reply
I am trying to solve and improve my design quility