What is wrong with my mixing/mastering?

This one got rejected on friday for not meeting the guidelines for mixing and mastering. I’m not angry or sad. I want to improve. So please tell me what you think. (Btw it’s now free download so enjoy it.)

Thank You all.

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Flute Sound is Very High at beginning. i think.

0:33 that flute and so on was clearly too loud, sample at 0:55 maybe was just a bit of too much. Cause it’s a commercial platform they are very captious about high freqs. Anyway, it’s just my opinion on what seems to be a problem for commercial market. Maybe someone can say more. Also, i need to add that i really like your song, sick stuff! Cheers! :wink:

just balance the instruments , this is the biggest mistake of all authors )