Rejection.

Envato Authors Audio Authors
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Hello! In my opinion the track does not look commercial.
Namely:

  1. Too long intro, I would shift from 0:23 to the beginning. Better to start the track from 0:23.
  2. Panning is shifted to the right (track sounds “askew”).
  3. If you listen after 1:20 (I don’t quite understand the transition, I would just divide this track into 2 versions)
  4. Too much swing, it sounds not quite synchronized.
  5. I do not like the piano by the sound, most likely it is better to replace it with another one by the sound, and there is also a croaking and squeezing (maybe you overdid it with compression).

That’s all I noticed, good luck!