Rejected my Halloween flyer

hi, indeed, for me the real issue that u have here is that u did not build around the titles and main text but sort of looked like adding the text after generating the composition, which is the wrong way to do if u ask me, as this is altering the global positioning elements as regard to z lay out and impact zones and provides people with the feeling that the text has been sort of pasted afterwards on something already existing , so to speak …

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