Rejected.. my first song.

Anybody can suggest me how to fix this music?
Tnx a lot :slight_smile:

Music starts too abruptly, it would be nice to have some kind of intro. It seemed to me that tambourine does not get into the rhythm in some parts. In general, the mix does not sound clearly enough, does not reach the level. The idea itself is not bad, it could well be a decent track, if finalized

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