I agree with the other comments. There’s definitely potential to turn it into a great track though.
The biggest issue I have is that the guitar and synths don’t sound realistic enough to me. I would drop the drums in sooner and build the song up a bit more. Add more elements later in the piece to keep it interesting. I think increasing the tempo by a few beats would help make it sound more exciting too.
Also, this could be a quality issue with the Soundcloud link, but it sounds like a really bad mp3. Check to ensure you are uploading a very high quality file.
Hope this helps.