Please Help !!! Can i have chance with this Template

I sent my Template to Themeforest,Its my first Template, So Please what you think of my template, Is he still in need of improvement?
Demo :

Still needs starting over.

All we sent you entire still stands.

It’s completely broke on mobile.

Fundamental design features especially the Typography needs rethinking.

Lacks premium design.

Lacks unique elements.

Without meaning to be harsh you are wasting your time trying to get this approved and need to start over having taken the time to refine design skills and understand the quality and detail involved in files here.