Need your feedback regarding my rejected audio item.

Hi everybody,

We recently submitted an audio item and got rejected for this reason(s):

Unfortunately, this submission doesn’t meet AudioJungle’s commercial quality guidelines overall, and can’t be accepted.

Audio must be fully composed, arranged, mixed and/or mastered to a commercial standard, and have reasonable potential utility to our commercial buyers, for their varied projects. Ideal audio submissions should demonstrate the ability to support multiple visual works in general. A higher degree of general commercial viability would therefore be required.

The item (long version):

Any feedback will be appreciated,
Thank you!

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  • I think i know what you tried with those “Out of tempo” notes, but doesn’t fit always.
  • You need to work more in the mix and the master.
  • Too much repetitive, needs more arrangements.

Hope this can help.

Hi!

I think that the track is too much ripetitive, it sounds too much empty, it needs for me more instruments and the second part I would add some variations of the melody or something. It could be boring.

There are some issues on mixing like the bass that is not focused and too big in some low freq, drums too tiny. Need a better mastering too.

I think some filter automation would help general but specially in the drop at 1:12.
Also i am not sure but is the kick a little to loud?