Need your advice for my rejected item

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Hi,
Today I got my rejection email from TF reviewer ( hard reject ). I want to know your idea and advice about my item for the next submission.
http://ravistheme.com/pinar/wp/landing/

Also we have the HTML version of this item on Themeforest ( it was approved about 2 months ago ). Here is the URL of HTML version it.
http://ravistheme.com/pinar/html/

Thanks in advance for your valuable replies.

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It looks good, you could try another font, and improve dropdown menu

3

Thanks for your replay and great suggestions.

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Any advice would be appreciated.