Need some help with my audio track:)


#1

Hello, everyone!
This is my first uploaded track and… first reject). Help!. What’s wrong with it? Need your advice.
Thanks for your opinion.:innocent:
Energy


#2

I think miss of melodies could be a reason of reject. Try to add some additional themes at parts that you repeating. Good luck!


#3

Thank you!


#4

I think, there is an error harmonic structure? in track 1:44 sec… There are too many recurring motifs in yours composion… monotonous trend is not good

also ( between 1:32-1:46) this theme would be more appropriate for beginning track…

so that the composition could have been better…

this is my musical vision… best regards

What reason was rejected?


#5

They said "…we’ve determined that ‘Energy’ isn’t at the quality standard needed…"
1:44 sec - isn’t a mistake… as for me )
“too many recurring motifs” - Yap. I think you are right.
Thank you for advice!