Need feedback on rejected cinematic track

Hi!
Another hard rejected with standard answer - “does not meet the general commercial quality standard…"
https://soundcloud.com/user-357475472/dramatic-sad-orchestral
I try to understand, is it really so bad melody for AudioJungle or are there some problems in the arrangement?

Need some feedback, please!

Hi @Eliho!
I think that your melody is decent! In my opinion the problem is the orchestra sounds!
Try a different library and pay attention to dynamics and velocities…
Good luck

Thank you very much! I’ll try.

hey!

I think it’s excessive compressed…
Hey :raised_hand_with_fingers_splayed:t3:

Try to listen top tracks here on AJ, especially in your favorite styles. Try to achieve that quality and sound. Your music must meet the profession standarts and have commercial value for video projects. Also I can recommend to learn on YouTube tutorials, courses more and keep going to write music. Write the music you would buy for yourself.
The quality of tracks on AJ is improving day by day so you have to match this and permanently work hard and learn I believe.
I wish you will get it!

Cheers :call_me_hand:t3:

Thank you!