need any improvements?

hi , i just finished my new after efects project. Before uploading i want know what do you think about it? https://youtu.be/homTpztnq9M need any improvements?

Not a fan of the font. Doesn’t seem to work with the overall design. Not sure if the boxes for the text work as well, maybe spend a bit of time on those as well.

Also, with your lighting/background, it’s going from a medium blue/purple to a medium grey. I think it would look a lot classier if it went to a very dark grey instead. Apart from that I think it’s looking great!

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Thank You =)

Too smal text size in the boxes for me. In General, looks great!

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The camera movement seems a bit random and rigid to me.

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hard rejected :smiley: i started to another project , hope it not will rejected