My logo being rejected

My logo been rejected. Maybe you can give suggestion comment on my submitted logo.
So i have the clear guideline for what should i improve for my next submission.
Thanks for helps

hi maybe they will either consider that some of your lines are too thin as they are much considering the logo in a very small size (does it make sense, i do not know but they do lol) or they may also wander what this abstract shape is all about and wander about the commercial potential of this item … otherwise maybe using a more oriignal typo would help u, too

Typography may be more attractive.

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probably but not sure that tehy like the abstract style of the shape he made too …