Can I get Advice for my rejected Logo?

Please someone can give me some advice?

hi i personally like it but i see a few small reasons for this logo to be rejected indeed … for me , the main reason is the very thin strokes given to all shapes indeed … i think that both the illustration and the font should look kind of bolder … plus the tagline is missing, not sure this is really required or not but i have never seen any being accepted without having it …

ohh thank you so much

u are welcome , if u feel like have clues enough for u to improve your work , just check the “solution” box :slight_smile: