My first project got rejected, i need feedback. Help me!

Hello, friends! I ask for your help. why it’s rejected?

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I ask you to point out my mistakes so that I can take them into account in my further work.

Thank you!
Have a nice day

In my opinion, motion has to be smooth using easy ease keyframes and curves graph editor. Everything looks like you didn´t use easy ese keyframes at all. Font is outdated. Design is too simple in general. Think first of all that there are a lot of items like yours, so too much competition. Your item needs to be really outstanding.
Keep working and good luck! :+1:

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Thanks for your feedback!

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