Hey Joe. It is a good track. The build is consistent, the vibe is good.Sadly i cannot speak about the mix. On crappy earbuds right now.But it translates good on phone speakers and that is really important. The piano lead is good, catchy. Maybe if you can add some delay on it in order to give ot a bit more sustain it would be great.I wouldn’t advice to use longer notes. Might give it an obsolete vibe, which you do not want to. Also one of the chords seems a bit shady. The second inversion of the second bar.You might either change the guitar or the bass.Hope that helps.Cheers.
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