Hi guys! I need some feedback for my track that I wrote today. I’ve send some tracks to AudioJungle recently and all of them have been rejected. I wrote something different, more commercial and I’m wondering if it’s good enough as I really want to avoid more rejections. If you’d have any tips and opinions that would help me I’ll be very grateful. Thanks!
1 Like
at 1:45 it has a high volume hi hat stutter
kick could have 1-2 dB less 70Hz
most important the hihats at 1:44-1:146 are too loud
this will be approved for me
1 Like
Thank you for your reply and tips. You were right about this loud part and the kick also seems to sound better now. I’m gonna uploud it and I hope for my first song on AJ. Thanks! 
1 Like
Hi there. Here’s a corrected/mastered version which I’ll send to AJ. I hope mix and master is good enough would you take a listen?
There is almost no development. Chaos with panning and space. Aftertouch on the guitar at 12, 27.57 … seconds should be removed or set to the rhythm. Violins and some sounds are very loud. Frequency balance is not comfortable due to the fact that all instruments play in the same range. The idea is great! You’d have to polish it and it’d be a great track. I doubt that the track will be accepted in this form. But this is my personal opinion. Just decided to share my thoughts. May be useful to you. Good luck!
1 Like
thanks for your reply and sharing your thoughts! i’m gonna do my best to fix it. Probably I have to learn more about panning and spacing order because I’m doing it mostly by ear. Maybe I should be more radical in panning. Probably the whole song is too centered…
How to fix frequency balance? That’s a good question. I just gonna mix it again. I’ll keep working and share with you another version. Thanks:)
don’t just trust anyone that gives feedback. in the age we live everybody has an opinion to freely tell it.
trust your inner self and keep practicing so you have your own opinion. and always try! and try harder each time