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Could you give some feedback on my html coming soon template. It has had a few hard rejections now.

Here is the link.

In my browsers ( admittedly testing a new site so cache is potentially all over the place) it is broken in FF and Safari e.g. menu half off canvas in FF and content stuck up top safari

Generally far too much empty space

Fundamental like margins, spacing, typography, hierarchy etc. all need a lot of work

Thank you very much, is it achievable to get it accepted or should I start again on a different design?

With all due respect i’d start over - there is to much needed to fix this and to add to it

Ok thanks for you help