is my html / css ready for approval



I developed HTML template with a slider having caption animation .
The demo is here HTML Template.
please offer your esteemed opinion.and help me develop it further.


With all due respect you need to forget this completely; familiarize yourself with design fundamentals and the standard of items for sale here; and start something new


i will do as you said


i am looking more opinions


i got technology
like the back ground color and flexible sub-title size
i can always design new one