hi, my first project just got hard rejection… please help me, I need your feedback
here is my template : DEMO
With all due respect you are quite a way off.
the basics like typography, margins, alignment and spacing all need a lot of work.
there are a great number of inconsistencies throughout and while there are some nice touches and ideas the execution is not great.
there is not a huge amount which make sit stand out as original and feels like ‘a lot of bits piled together on a page for the sake of it’, rather than any kind of logical hierarchy.
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…
ps. What this landing page sells?
Thanks guys, you’ve opened my eyes