I need a feedback for my WordPress Theme

Hi,
I made a minimalistic WordPress theme for agencies and freelancers - a (yet another) portfolio theme. The theme is not yet submitted to Envato.

Here are the demos:
http://planeta.getenjoyment.net/
http://planeta2.getenjoyment.net/
http://planeta3.getenjoyment.net/
http://planeta4.getenjoyment.net/
The demo loading time is very slow because I’m on free hosting, so please be patient

I know that in demos 3 and 4 some typography problems that can be easily fixed (there is some error on servers)

I really need your honest opinion if this theme can pass the review process.

Thank you :slight_smile:

You worked hard and spent lots of time for building the theme. But, I am sorry to say, the design of the theme is very basic. I did not find any artistic or innovative things in your design. Please compare your design with approved items in the marketplace. Hopefully, you will understand what you did and what you have to do for get a approved item.
Best wishes