How to improve this rock track?

Hey Junglers,

can you give me please some feedback on this item and how do you think can I improve it? I am having problems understanding why it got rejected and I am trying to improve my listening skills.


Sounds pretty good until 0:48. Then suddenly there is a dissonant theremin/ organ sound coming in? The drums sound a bit weak and muffled. Towards the end things get really a bit out of tune.
The overall mix is a bit too bright maybe.

Good luck.

Thanks a lot for your feedback!

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