https://soundcloud.com/user-610745791/pian1
What do you think about this piano?
How do you think it sounds now?
How could I improve it, what should I do more?
Thank you very much and sorry for my English !!
All the best !
Hi, nice arrangement
I would tame down your left hand a bit and rise the level of the right hand and the second layered piano, the bass notes are hiding the main melody.
Good luck
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Hey, something that might help is reducing the dynamics in the velocities. This can be done in the region inspector in Logic Pro (not sure about other DAWs) and if you use it subtly it’ll bring the overly loud notes down a little, and bring the overly quiet notes up a little, sounding smoother overall. Also, don’t be afraid of quantising a little. Similar to the velocity dynamics, you can bring the quantisation level down to somewhere around 75-90% and it’ll sound steadier but not robotic.
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https://soundcloud.com/user-610745791/pianv2
Hello guys!
Thanks for the tips!
I tried to improve the song after your advice!
Do you think it’s better?
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Hey, nice work following Sonicbyte’s advice and getting the left hand tamed. I think there are still too many hard velocities in the right hand though, they stick out a lot, which isn’t good for royalty free music.
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Thank you again!
I’ll try to do better this time!
Greetings!
Thanks for your contribution!
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Beautiful melody! A little lack of a low timbre …
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Thank you very much !
I appreciate it !
Now I think it’s better, what do you think?
https://soundcloud.com/user-610745791/pian3v
Hi again,
I think it sounds better but maybe you should add the layered piano melody to enter much later in the song, give the main melody a couple of bars to shine and then add the layered piano, that will give you a bit of surprise and a more interesting song in the end.
Of course is a matter of personal taste, hope it helps.
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Hey
maybe more automatization?
and more realistic sound…maybe more reverberation like the playing in real hall…
I wish U’ll get it
Cheers!
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Thank you all for your time and for help!
A wonderful community!
I’ve been trying to make some improvements, I hope this time to be fine!
What do you think ?
Do you think he could get to AJ???
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