hi , well i guess it was because the typo, the readability, the hierarchy can be improved indeed and that apart from the text part there is nothing too much in terms of graphic design , which is a bit of a problem as regard to commercial potential in a way since , people maybe likely to redo or do by themselves rather than buying in my view … At this stage this is harmonious and colorful but u need to make sure that important information is popping out more, that typo is offering a bit more originality and combinations and that the alignment is fully coherent , the “call us” part being flagged on the left when all the rest is flagged in the middle …
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lol yes very superficial changes as for i see lol basically u almost have all the same mistake apart from the alignment indeed …