Hard Rejection, please Help

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#1

Hello, my first submission was hard rejected which means I cannot resubmit it. I expected that from what I read about other newbie authors but unfortunately I did not receive feedback on what I need to improve to meet the industry standards. Could you please advise me on that?

Here is the link: https://youtu.be/pW4ruMRO9n8

Thank you for everyone who helps me.

#2
  1. Low mastering Level 2. The instrument unaltered the characteristics of the modulation, and the like. 3. The tempo is low.
#3

Good idea, but very long structure and bat mixing!!!

#4

Alright, you helped me a lot. Thank you for your feedback guys

#5

Nice idea, but mix is not very good. Maybe you should try some better sound libraries, also it feels like you can work more on some details in arrangement. I hope this was helpful to you.

Regards