Hard rejection... Feedback please!!!!

My track hard rejected.
Why? Any ideas? Thanks a lot.

Hello! Yes, this is a deserved reject! The start is normal. Choir from 0:18. it sounds not quite like a chorus (or not very clear) It doesn’t sound quite commercially, your chorus, solo brass, piano from 0:53 (asks very much in your ears(resonates strongly) and it is not completely suitable). The ending is not successful (I expected another, more powerfully)! Good luck!

I liked it, it’s a great track that I would be happy to buy, I’m baffled as to why my wordpress theme has been rejected in less time than it takes to make a cup of coffee, so I feel for you man.