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Can I get feedback so I can get more approvals?

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Interesting! A bit too experimental for Envato, probably. A few deal breakers, IMO:

  1. WAY TOO LONG. Try to condense the most interesting elements, breaks and arrangements in ~2mn.
  2. The saturated, overcompressed, lo fi snare gets a bit repetitive if used all along the track. Maybe go for something more ear-friendly and add it in a specific segment.
  3. The 2ndary snare that plays in kinda triplets and then rolls gets a bit repetitive too. I’d dosify it.

Overall: the track sounds cool but feels like, and this is totally personal, building a looped arrangement after another. I’d try to think how to make the structure and parts progressions more interesting and probably be a bit more conservative with the sound design and the mix.

Just my two cents.

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