Feedback for Coming Soon template needed

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#1

Hi all,

I would appreciate if you guys could lend me some feedback about my soft rejected coming soon template.

http://alphawebdesign.net/zerox-coming-soon/

Thanks :)!


#2

Your design is good but I need know why your design is soft rejected but I need your show message soft rejected that come your email, regards.

p.d: do you understand my reply?


#3

Good start but not finished. Another point is, there are lots of similar templates so you should at least find better idea


#4

Not sure if it is a slider or image etc. but whatever the main hero content is does not load on a mobile


#5

Hello @alphadesignsau.

A very decent attempt on Coming Soon template.
However, it appears to be too simple in an overly saturated marketing.

I would recommend you to add a bit of uniqueness in the template.
Fancy boxes around features section and a more complex footer would get you off a good start.

Have a nice day.