Hi,
My theme has been rejected, could you give my some clues?
what’s its category? You should create more elements. Some headings are hard to read
it’s a cooming soon / under construction theme.
long way to go buddy. need to learn and practice a lot
could you be more specific? 
There is nothing to say specifically. The entire concept execution, legibility, spacing, typo,color,contrast, user friendliness - nothing is there.
Need to keep trying a lot.
All the best
anyone else?
Hard to read. some efects dont render properly, spacing & contrast.
The overall idea its good
In my opinion, the pictures are good but texts are hard to read and too small. May be you should create more elements