Could you review about my theme?


#1

Hi,

My theme has been rejected, could you give my some clues?

http://projects.emretekince.com/pury/


#2

what’s its category? You should create more elements. Some headings are hard to read


#3

it’s a cooming soon / under construction theme.


#4

long way to go buddy. need to learn and practice a lot


#5

could you be more specific? :smile:


#6

There is nothing to say specifically. The entire concept execution, legibility, spacing, typo,color,contrast, user friendliness - nothing is there.
Need to keep trying a lot.
All the best


#7

anyone else?


#8

Hard to read. some efects dont render properly, spacing & contrast.

The overall idea its good


#9

In my opinion, the pictures are good but texts are hard to read and too small. May be you should create more elements