Watermark? This is not necessary for project presentations. Only for Motion Graphics and Stock Footages. The problem is that you pay too much attention to the robot, and the logo remains in the background. The customer should buy this for their logo, not because of your robot.
If you look at the appearance of the logo, it is primitive. Saber was popular a few years ago and there is nothing new here. Lightning looks weird and not realistic. This makes the contrast of a realistic robot and non-realistic lightning. Scenes are alien to each other.
Why is the logo flattened? It’s wrong.
Also big problems with typography:
font is outdated
the font is huge
the distance between the lines is also huge
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