i think the problem is your typography and if the bird is standing try to add legs.
Also provide horizontal orientation version of your logo.
Your words seem right
It’s not clear whether it is a parrot or other type of bird!!!
At small sizes, the details disappear.
Text require more work.
Change the category of work and do not waste time and motivation with logo, not worth it. You can do everything perfectly and the logo is rejected because of quality standard, so you think what’s the problem.
Thank you very much for the tips .
thanks for. Illustration I will follow your advice.
I totally agree with you!!