Your feedback please ?


#1

Hi all,
previously i have uploaded some projects but they were rejected but now am here with my new project

V1:

V2:

Please watch this video and tell me is this project will be approved or not.
Could it be evaluated to be submitted?
If yes then i will submit it in videohive. Waiting for your precious response.
Or else please give me suggestions what changes should be done.

Thank you.


#2

I think this project will get hard reject for sure.
Just because of the text which cannot be read.
And whole project so simple and static…


#3

What about this project ?


#4

Much better. But … you need to remove at least this “free spaces”