Your feedback please ?

Hi all,
previously i have uploaded some projects but they were rejected but now am here with my new project



Please watch this video and tell me is this project will be approved or not.
Could it be evaluated to be submitted?
If yes then i will submit it in videohive. Waiting for your precious response.
Or else please give me suggestions what changes should be done.

Thank you.

I think this project will get hard reject for sure.
Just because of the text which cannot be read.
And whole project so simple and static…

What about this project ?

Much better. But … you need to remove at least this “free spaces”