Sorry but with respect this is all sorts of wrong and nowhere close to the standards.
It breaks pretty much every design principal including construction, typography, consistency, margins, colouring, plus the design is a really weird dimension with the mock ups are all pixelated and in a very odd perspective
You need to spend some time refining your skills and examining the attention to detail and premium quality of successful items already for sale on envato.
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Thank you, I want to study Measures of evaluation of designs to promote my knowledge and improve my designs, and I don’t want to