"UPDATE" will my design approve on themeforest?

i have updated typography but i cant where is the problem of alignment even i fixed where i found problem and i just updated 3 home pages for demo. i think design is good please tell me where is the problem. i am new designer. i want to learn. i have no friend for tell my problem and i am handicap cap, i cant sit for 5 to 8 hours a days due to physical health. i hope you @charlie4282 understand my condition.

You need to avoid opening multiple threads about the same design.

You have answers in both other conversations Check My figma design. - #7 by wajid563 and will my design approve on themeforest? - #12 by charlie4282

It is better for your feedback and the general feed in the forums to not create new discussions