Track rejected. What feedback would you give?

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Hi all,

This track I made was rejected by Audiojungle.

https://soundcloud.com/twoaudiotwelve/sample

I got what seems to be the standard rejection message: “This submission does not meet our commercial production (recording/mixing/mastering) standard, and our commercial composition/arrangement standard”.

Any feedback would be much appreciated to understand what areas could be improved. I’d be keen to hear exactly what about the composition, arrangement, mixing and mastering could be better.

Many thanks.

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that bell like sound not only sticks out like a sore thumb but, it’s not in the same key as the song. i would find another sound and replace it.

3

Thanks for the reply, ProTunes. Appreciate the comment.

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Np buddy