[Soft Rejected] Need help with comments

Hi all…

I have been soft rejected… Here is the message:

  1. The overall hierarchy of this item requires some additional work.
    Focus on better defining which areas of this item should demand more

There are spacing and alignment issues throughout this item. Please
take a moment to make sure that all elements are aligned perfectly and
everything is spaced consistently from section to section.

Need the communities help… Any suggestions ? I have aligned and realigned the typography and pictures and the like. Obviously I am missing something and need an extra set of eyes to look at it… Any help would be much appreciated…




I got exactly the same review if you get any help let me know and ill do the same for you.

Sure… I will keep you informed if I hear anything…



Anyone who can make a suggestion ?



  1. Typography needs some work, specially menu at top looks too generic and dated
  2. Frontpage should have some more descriptive spots, although concept is minimal but i still feel that it lacks something unique and useful
  3. need some effort on UX perspective make it much smoother and design should by in-flow

is great already mr @Kreativeme

Thanks… I appreciate the input! I think that I have found the issues and am going to fix those. It was an alignment and higharchey issue… I think that I have addressed those in my new version. We will see what the reviewer says, but I think I found where those issues are at and I have fixed those… We will see… Thanks all for your input…