First item soft rejected feedback needed


#1

Hello Authors,

This is the first item we want to upload, after third try we are a bit concerned why item cannot pass. We’ve done all the improvements requested to us. The items highlighted in bold were fixed in second try and the reviewer didn’t mention them in his comments (no significant changes were made for third try), now in third try they are back. We asked him for a little more of details, but unlucky with no answer.

We hope someone here can give us a hand and open our eyes to those issues. This is our template
http://bit.ly/1UjmKnq

And these are the comments of the reviewer.

  1. READABILITY: Parts of your design are either difficult to read or
    have contrast issues. Please make sure all sections of your design have
    adequate contrast and all text is easily readable on all devices.

  2. SCROLLING ANIMATIONS: The scrolling animations are currently
    overused. Animation is a tool that should be used sparingly to help
    enforce the concept of your design. Please consider where you are using
    animations and their purpose.

3. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy--webdesign-11636

4. VISUAL HIERARCHY: The visual hierarchy of this item requires
additional work. Focus on better defining which areas of this item
should demand more attention and creating a logical structure to the
design. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-hierarchy-webdesign-14947

5. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in
this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and
spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles
with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401, http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836

6. COLOR PALETTE: The chosen color palette requires additional work. For more information, see: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-color-theory-for-web-designers--webdesign-1437

7. The typography needs improvement.

Best regards.


#2

Hello @5studiosnet,

The reviewers are right. You need a lot of improvements.

1.) Typorgraphy is totally not appealing. Use differents fonts.
2.) Colors should be more elegant and appealing. Present one is very dull.
3.) Don’s use animation everywhere.
4.) Have consistent spacing.

Check the present items in the market and get some ideas from them. I am sure you will get where you stand behind. After correction submit again and you will get approved.

Thanks,
Theme Curator


#3

Thanks for your kind answer @ThemeCurator.

I was wondering, if you could brings us a hint, per say [quote=“ThemeCurator, post:2, topic:50150”]
4.) Have consistent spacing.
[/quote], where do we have that issue?

We are working on other observations, as we found some improvements that can be done indeed.

Best regards.


#4

Hello @5studiosnet in hero area text and in header. Try to give more space in header and reduce them when scrolled. Use different fonts also like bold, normal. presently all text is having light weight.


#5

Hello again!

After we made changes to our theme, the reviewer still reject it. Why?

What needs to be done in order to get approved?

THE CHANGES ARE NOT ENOUGH: Unfortunately, the changes are not enough
and the previous review still stands. Please carefully check your item
to make sure all problems were adequately addressed before resubmitting
this item.

We really need your kindly help and experience dear authors.

Regards.


#6

Friends!!!

Is any body able to help us please?

@ThemeCurator what do you think about?


#7

Someone?

We think our theme was ready, unfortunately the reviewer doesn’t think the same, that’s fine, but is frustrating to not know where to change after we’ve changed, and getting worse when there is no feedback.

We are ready to read any kind of criticism, so please, is this first item not ready indeed? why?, we’ll appreciate your thoughts.

Best regards.


#8

Hello @5studiosnet,

First of all you have changed the things that are good but not enough.

1.) Now the spacing is to much have some decent spacing not to much. Reduce by some pixels.
2.) Improve the typography. You have improved but still some parts need them. e.g pricing tables etc.
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this texts are having font-size and line-height issue and use some colors to make them highlight to define that something is written out there.

Then resubmit again and I wish it will get accepted.

Thanks,
Theme Curator


#9

Thanks so much again @ThemeCurator,

You’ve been such a great help for us, we will take care of yours thoughts, and re-check again the entire theme.

Regards.