i Dont know why Rejected ?
HI. Animation and design are too simple and basic. It definitely needs to have smoother moves. And don´t forget there are lots of logo reveals like this. Try to watch them to see differences between them and yours.
Good Luck! 
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Thanks for the tip. I made some adjustments and I hope that this time will be accepted
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I watched the link. Sorry if I think the same. It´s still very basic about design and moves are too abrupt. Try to work on that to make it different. Watch other examples on Videohive to see what I´m saying.
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To do a smooth interpolation of the keys. example:
Hey friend 
Your work so simple but this time the motion is better than before , you need to strength your imagination more before you make any new work gather some reference ( The Inspiration Stage ), think about the work as you are a director and the logo, typography, colors and other element of composition like an actors, this called stage of direction >>>
Motion Graphic is all about solid imagination and artistic feeling rather than skills
I will do so thank you