Rejected template submissions

Hello,

I am new to being an author. I submitted a few templates about a week ago and just got my first review back and it came back rejected stating, “unfortunately we found it isn’t at the quality standard required to move forward, and you won’t be able to re-submit this item again.”

Can someone please look at what I submitted and give some feed back ?

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hi sorry to say just this as i am sure u did your best but honestly there is much to do indeed, especially as regard to the typo and in particular for the main title, all is too flat, not pairing well and basically lacking impact , not to mention that this is logically hurting hierarchy of information, readability and spacing. The back ground part is an interesting base to work withbut teh front composition is way too simple, either u play the celebration part further more or u develop the composition much much more, it depends on u but at this stage, this mid way is not working, all elements look kind of pasted when this is the other way around that is expected in compositions, actually …

thank you for your feedback.

u are welcome