Flyer Rejections: Feedback welcomed

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#1

Hi All,

Of late, I’ve had a few rejections of items that I was fairly confident would be accepted. Looking for genuine constructive feedback. I still think the items are better than the average i’ve seen uploaded in recent weeks.Certainly not the best, but better than average. Each item has 4 document sizes (A4, A5, US, 1/2 US). Here are the A4 versions:

Thanks in advance for any tips.

Jake

#2

personally, first one is too simple, second one needs better typography. :slight_smile:

#3

Thanks for the feedback. I’ll have another play around with them.