"Quality Standard" Rejection. Looking for feedback.

I submitted my first Premiere Pro MOGRT template and received the standard “it isn’t at the quality standard required to move forward” rejection. Looking for feedback on what I could possibly change or add to maybe have it be accepted. The titles themselves can be placed over any background.

Sorry for you HR.
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Would these changes still apply if I was creating this MOGRT more as a title overlay than a scene? Basically is meant to be place over any footage without a built in background.