Please help ! Another rejection :(

#1

This is like my 10th time how i am sending tracks, i really thought they gonna approve this one, but nope, i need advice ! Real and honest !

https://soundcloud.com/dreamerbeats/modern-corporate-technology/s-iwqGG

Thanks !
Lazar

#2

This track sounds more like retro/synthwave, not corporate. So maybe it’s better to upload it to Electronica category.
It is not bad. It lacks bottom end. That filtered chords pad is playing all the time - it’s boring. Maybe you should try to change more instruments during the composition. Personally I don’t like the dissonance between the bass and the chords on the third chord.

#3

Thanks for your opinion i really appreciate that, you are right about bottom end, i will keep everything what you said in mind for my next project.